We have … WINNERS!

Part the 1st:  Hey, kids, it’s the 30th!  Which means the end of NaNoWriMo 2013.  Which means — let’s go to the word graph, Dave!

Nanowrimo 2013-11-30That’s the look of 51,466 words. YWriter says 51,058, but either way you cut it, it spells VICTORY:

Victory!And now, the other half of the exciting news.

Kay’s been doing NaNoWriMo (or the Young Writers Project) this year, too — but I haven’t been tracking her word count because she’s been a bit slowish in getting it to me because she was behind.  She had a target of 10K words, but as of this afternoon, she was under 7,500.

She kicked it out. She kicked ass. She cranked out over 2,500 words and made them sing, and ended up well over 10K.  Huzzah!

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Which means, in sum, we have two, two, two times the victory banners for NaNoWriMo this year (esp. since they YWP is using the same stickers):

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Dave Hill for “Bullets & Blood-Ties, Part 1”

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Katherine Hill for “Heroes Gathering”

More NaNoWriMo summary in a bit — but for now, whew! And it’s time for a margarita (for me, at least)!

The NaNoWriMo Home Stretch!

First off, look at this graph! Look!

NaNoWriMo word count, 11/27/2013

 

That’s what we call “ahead of the game” and “above the curve”.

Well, it’s not really a curve, more like a straight line.  But, as of this evening, I am ahead of where I need to be! Woot! 3,401 words written this evening at the Wednesday South Denver Panera Write-In, putting me at 46,319, only a mere 3,087  words short of VICTORY!

To Victory!

That’s child’s play!  I have Thursday, Friday, and Saturday to make it! I’m in! It’s easy! It’s —

Sorry, what was that?  Oh, right, Thanksgiving on Thursday. Get up, get the house tidied, folks arrive around Noon, entertain, drink some wine, eat some onion rings, help with table setting, eat dinner, take a walk, eat dessert, chit, chat, etc.  Big day, lovely holiday, all’s right with the world.

Thanksgiving (JSA, after Rockwell)

But, still, that leaves Friday and Saturday, and with just two days, I can easily —

Um, what’s that?  Oh, right, Friday. Our traditional “Invite everyone over for a game day to relax, play games, eat left-overs, relax, be sociable, stay up way late …”

Game Day!

Well … um … that leaves … Saturday.

Actually, I’m not really worried here.  It’s the Saturday South Denver Tattered Cover Write-In, and three hours is probably good, but there’s nothing actually stopping me from getting there a leeetle early and having more than enough time. No, really.  I mean, what could possibly go wrong …

What could possibly go wrong?

See? Easy-peasy!

The State of the NaNoWriMo Outline

Bad Writing Precedes Good WritingI did something very different this year in NaNoWriMo.  I wrote an outline.

Past years, I’ve gone with a connect the dots approach. I’ve had a beginning scene. I’ve had a sense of an ending scene. The rest is just getting from point A to point B.

This year, having been involved in some writing group discussions on the subject, I chose to do some outlining.  I actually had a multi-paragraph layout of an Intro, Four Acts, and a Conclusion, fleshed out in decent detail.  Not where I actually wanted to be with it — the technique I was using had several iterations to go — but enough to have some ideas.

As one of my protagonists, Roger, would know, no war plan survives the first encounter with the enemy.  My outline …

Well, it served as some nice guidelines. I managed to hopscotch over a bunch of stuff to have one of the big moments happen earlier than originally plotted. And rearranged some bits to backfill after that. And added a conflict I hadn’t expected to have. And some other scenes that came to mind.  I’m on my way to my second big disaster, and feeling pretty good about things.

I am glad I did the outlining, and I’m glad I was willing to bend and break it as the Muse pulled me along (nose rings are painful, I’ll tell you). I also am keeping in mind that I will not be done with the novel this year — 50K words is way too little. If lucky, I may be at or past the next big event by next Saturday, and the rest will be for me to pick up next November (assuming, he squirmed uncomfortably, I don’t do any work on it in the interim).

And, nicely enough, I’ll know then where I’m going with it. Because I have an outline.

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"... The Hammer is my keyboard."

“… The Hammer is my keyboard.”

Broke 40,000 words today, which is exactly where I need to be for today’s wordcount in NaNoWriMo, based on a 30 day month and today being the 24th and the target being 50,000 words.  A nice 2,079 words, ch-ching.

Of course, for me this is not a 30-day month, but, counting out Thanksgiving and day-after-Thanksgiving-Game-Day more like a 28 day month. I should have been tracking to that to begin with, but as we hurtle toward the end of the month (OMG NEXT SATURDAY), those little differences count.

So … no rest for the wicked, but I’ll pat myself lightly on the back for being where I am right now.

Stair-stepping my way to Victory!

nanowrimo 2013-11-19If I were a constant, consistent writer, I’d be in great shape, in and out of NaNoWriMo. Alas, I’m not. Big wordcount surges get followed by a day — or two — or three of sluggedness, of excuse-making, of being too busy to write, write, write.

Yeah, yeah, business trip, busy evening schedule, tired, yadda-yadda-yadda.  All of that equals a Sunday and Monday of no writing.  Which, in NaNo terms means not just moving forward, but also falling behind.

I made up for a bit of it tonight, kicking out over 3800 words.  I had been doing some outlining during some of those awful business meetings, so I was ready to plow ahead (even though things didn’t go quite as planned).  The result is the stair-step pattern.  The goal being that, if I’m going to stair-step, I just need to make sure I keep making sure there’s another step rising up.

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Almost caught up (again)

Keep Calm and Write 50KI was ahead of the game Thursday.

I blew off (fell asleep) Friday.

I kicked out 3K words today at a write-in to pull even with where I should be.

It was odd. They seemed very interested in St. Jean. I very much wanted to know why. “Scoping things out,” I said. “I could see the number the gent at the front desk –” Who had clearly told them about me. “– rang, so I went up to that floor to get the lay of the land. I might need to find a niche to lean into if I catch up with this Mary St. John and they head back to the hotel.”
Wolchowsky had moved up behind my chair. “You wouldn’t have broken into her hotel room, would you?”
I turned partially and craned my neck to meet his gaze. “That would be illegal, Detective Wolchowsky,” I said, letting myself sound slightly puzzled.
He put a hand on my shoulder, “Listen, you –”
“That’s enough, Stan,” Gill said. “Let it go.”
“We should –”
“Let it go, Stan.”
A pause, then Wolchowsky pushed my shoulder as he stepped back. “Fine.”

Enjoying myself at the moment, and wrapped up a 10Kword Chrys chapter, so I’m feeling good.

Nearing the halfway mark

I’m currently at 24,324, which is not quite a day ahead of the game. The handy widget on the page indicates that at this rate, I’ll be done on 29 November.

Yyyeeeah … assuming I have no other lapses and that I write my share of words every day, including Thanksgiving Day. Which seems … dubious.

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Still, I’m generally getting great traction at the two local Write-Ins I go to, and doing decently from home each evening.  For the first time in a novel and a half, I’m feeling solid about a chapter with one of my two protagonists, which makes me wonder what I’ve been doing wrong until now.  I’m been having good scenes pop out of my outline and out of my brain at a reasonable clip, and have another one to follow along tomorrow.

The outline has been a help, but not nearly that cast-in-concrete thing I thought it would be.  The characters have had a mind of their own as to what’s natural for them to do, and sometimes it feels like I’m a mere conduit for them. Still, it’s a comfort to have some plot milestones to aim toward (no matter how much veering goes on beforehand), as well as the flexibility to throw in the stuff I think about along the way.

D C Fontana on writingIt remains a serious grind to invest an hour and a half or so each evening doing this thing.  That’s somewhat discouraging in terms of long-term “Hey, I can be a writer as a side-line” kind of stuff — the focus that NaNoWriMo provides is elusive the other eleven days of the year.  I joke about winning the lottery, but it would certainly be easier to work 2.5 hours per day than 11.5 hours per day.

But, bah! And, never you mind!  I’m finishing this NaNo year on time and with some product I can be happy with.  That’s all that I know, and that’s all that matters.

Caught up! Well, at least until tomorrow …

“A vampire comes to town that has no vampires. People are killed by a vampire.” I smiled, without mirth.  “As a detective, I believe I have solved the case.”

Hemingway on WritingPush, push, push, and I’m at 18,816 words, out of the 18,337 I’m supposed to be at.  Huzzah! My deficit for being a lazy slug last week is erased. Yay, me!

Of course, in an hour and smattering of minutes, I’ll suddenly be behind by 1,200 words or so.  That’s the damnable thing about NaNoWriMo … you’re never ahead for very long.

But, for this brief, shining moment — I’m ahead!

Almost caught up

Calvin & Hobbes - moodI won’t say it was a marathon, but I cranked out another 2,500 words plus today, to bring me to just over 16K, or about 700 words behind where I should be.  Which is close enough for today’s effort, since I’d like to spend some time with my wife this weekend. 🙂

That, and a big cliff-hanger, protagonists in conflict, a dagger at the throat (or a close analog thereto), and … what happens next?!

Actually, I know what happens next, which is kind of neat.

My rough outline isn’t exactly in tatters, but events have occurred somewhat out of order on it — faster in some places, but with room to circle back.  Plus there’s another subplot I haven’t put in yet.

And here we are, a third of the way through — go, NaNos, go!