First part of today’s NaNoWriMo writing:
Ugh. This is scene slow. Painful. Hard to write.
Paralleling something from last chapter, from another PoV. Should be easy.
But the dialog feels stilted. Forced.
And … oh crap, oh no, this scene makes no sense. That character wouldn’t allow it to happen. That character would absolutely know that’s a horrible idea.
Ugh. I can’t stand this.
O Muse, why hast thou abandoned me?
Fine. time for a flashback. Whatevs.
Second part of today’s NaNoWriMo Writing:
Ooooh, this is fun.
Write! Write! Write!
Oh, nice twist.
How can I fix this on the fly — oh, that’s how! Awesome!
O Muse, All Honor and Glory Be Unto Thee!
Go Dave! Glad you are back at the keyboard.
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