Dear Mr. Hill. Surprised to see the [company] name on the enclosed 2 in 1 Teamwork Peak 300 Atlas Diary sample?
Why, yes, I was. I was even more surprised to see the city name you used. It’s technically correct (if you do a ZIP code lookup, it reveals we are in Lakewood), but is not what we — or anyone else in our business complex — use (Golden). (The area was actually unincorporated JeffCo, but a Golden PO, until Lakewood annexed the property; all the established businesses still have official permission to use their Golden address, however, and do.)
Thus, the free 2 in 1 Teamwork Peak 300 Atlas Diary (pant pant) is kind of useless, since anyone who asked where our “Lakewood office” is would get blank looks (and failed searches).
In other words, yes, I was suprised, but I was not impressed. Which, I suspect, was more the sort of reaction you were fishing for.